Thursday, June 17, 2010


hw do i say..

i look at d lonely road ahead,
hoping 4 some indications 2 sail,
standing on mid way,
hoping...situations 2 get best.

walking,walking,walking,
all gets waste,
situations nt in favour,
solutions seems 2 be regret.

hopes shed,
fortune regrets,
hw do i say,
m d best....

6 comments:

  1. Love the concept..

    I don't know the solution, how can I be the best?

    Write more poems with such novel ideas.. in english too.. :)

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  2. zaroor bhaiya.......
    n i think u r d best.
    haan....hr insaan k adar kuch kamiyan hoti hain,
    agar tum apni kamiyon ko khatm karoge den.....
    U WL B D BEST.....

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  3. wow..
    Thanks Nikki..
    arey isse bada comment aur kya ho sakta hia.. :)

    Thanks..

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  4. Its amazing highly appreciated.keep the good work I really liked all your poems!

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  5. dis poem is awsum...
    its all abou reality...
    nd dis is the poem dat touched my heart 2 a large extent...
    i was about 2 cry after readin dis poem...
    awsum...
    hats off..........
    nitti

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  6. dnt cry nitti....
    nywYS thanx..

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